tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post462408197575376880..comments2023-03-31T13:07:43.981+05:30Comments on Welcome - Blossoms: Dearest...Ritikahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08510684082961126616noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post-31048918155547371292010-01-31T00:29:30.565+05:302010-01-31T00:29:30.565+05:30not bad buddy.........keep it up.....................not bad buddy.........keep it up....................Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08467001941008251046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post-69875859611953690852009-11-03T16:23:33.830+05:302009-11-03T16:23:33.830+05:30@alok- thanks..
@mayank- dat was pretty cool.. i ...@alok- thanks..<br /><br />@mayank- dat was pretty cool.. i have got two endings for my poem...tanx..Ritikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08510684082961126616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post-38012863908738353902009-11-02T23:21:43.703+05:302009-11-02T23:21:43.703+05:30gal u really expressed urslf well...
This is like ...gal u really expressed urslf well...<br />This is like a one everyone can relate to, or dedicate to their loved ones...i loved it :):)<br /><br />i feel you in my fingers,<br />i feel you in my toes...<br />i feel u everywhere around me,,<br />n so the gloom continues..<br /><br />i treasure u like gold,<br />ur picture is always in my eys..<br />ur my dream, my, love, my life..<br />i wanna spend my like wid u...<br />i wanna spend my life wid u..<br /><br />haha...jus wrote sumthn from my side..thinking abt the one i love...hope u like it too...(^_^)Mayankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01751303572799726835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post-6616160853365660792009-11-02T22:22:00.280+05:302009-11-02T22:22:00.280+05:30hey dats a cuul one...
i wasnt aware ki budhu ki i...hey dats a cuul one...<br />i wasnt aware ki budhu ki itni mast poem likh sakti hai ...ALOK JAINhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05634941262138722488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post-50175345783531777992009-10-31T20:35:11.614+05:302009-10-31T20:35:11.614+05:30It was nice and heartfelt...you could remove that ...It was nice and heartfelt...you could remove that simile - India's nuclear deal, since it is making this emotional poem funny, which is not what you intend to do, I guess.Buzzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17811082747400612065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post-46899457365200530672009-10-31T20:29:26.088+05:302009-10-31T20:29:26.088+05:30It's nice and heartfelt...you could use a bett...It's nice and heartfelt...you could use a better simile than India's nuclear deal, since that hinders the emotions of your poem...Buzzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17811082747400612065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post-53609817285623643212009-10-31T16:05:23.662+05:302009-10-31T16:05:23.662+05:30naah i merely added a little more gloom. :)naah i merely added a little more gloom. :)Rajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14521949812576502731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post-60748890547273620042009-10-31T14:56:40.261+05:302009-10-31T14:56:40.261+05:30wow...
i guess u completed my poem...
thanks..s...wow...<br /> <br />i guess u completed my poem...<br /><br />thanks..scarlet..Ritikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08510684082961126616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8301455512533125246.post-19046912078694386662009-10-31T11:20:50.055+05:302009-10-31T11:20:50.055+05:30i feel you on my lips
i feel you on my skin
you ar...i feel you on my lips<br />i feel you on my skin<br />you are my limbs<br />you are my akin<br /><br />if u leave <br />and i find you gone<br />know that i will die<br />without u i am noone<br /><br /><br />its stupid i know, but it just kinda u know sprung. :)Rajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14521949812576502731noreply@blogger.com