Thursday, April 15, 2010

SHATTERED

My eyes were closed,
My life was slow,
My heart was true,
My mind was translucent..

I am sure,
I can't hurt a soul.
I am soft spoken,
I am unselfishly.

I'LL NOT BE THE SAME ANYMORE.. 
People are shrewd,
People are cunning,
I can't take my life as it comes.

I'm hurt.. 
I'M hurt the most,
I won't be truthful,
I won't be polite,
I'll be unreasonable,
MY EYES ARE WIDE OPEN NOW,
I'll make the pace of my life faster,
My mind will be opaque,
 I can hurt people,
 I'll be selfish..

'COZ NOW, AM SHATTERED,
BADLY HURT..!!
:'((

3 comments:

Jack said...

Ritika,

Beautiful poem showing so much anguish at what has happened to make one change her basics. If it has anything to do with personal experience, I feel sad. Do share it, if you wish to. One should be awake to the ways of the world but that does not mean that one has to be selfish like others. One needs to be cautious and treat path with care.

Take care

Raj said...

hold on lady. you dont i repeat you dont change yourself to suit the world. you change the world around you to suit yourself. so if somthing or someone hurts you, trash them not your own personality. that was if the feelings were genuine.

if however it was a poem as such. gosh! great expression.

ritika said...

@jack uncle- thanks for commenting, ur comments encourage me to write more.. thank you, was upset..

@raj- i definitely need to change my ways, n i ll.. i have to become evil.. i have decided.. I M ANGRY.. :((